Object Writing: Tree
- Eloise
- Mar 22, 2023
- 1 min read
Curtained lanyards drift in a gentle breeze, sweeping through the air like wind chimes. The dull rustle of fresh leaves as they giggle back and forth, sharing gossip along their length, fills. the morning breath beside songbirds and gentle waters. Against its wayward trunk languishes a forlorn hat of violet, its edges lightly frayed but bearing little dust or grime. Its ribbon lays iron stiff with the bow only slightly wilted...
Damn haha. I was waylaid by a very energetic puppy trying to get this one out. It is especially hard to think with a chicken squeaky toy screaming a rhythm in your ear. Between that and trying not to get bitten by razor puppy teeth, it was tremendously hard to feel the flow.
It's been interesting to explore object writing while distracted. I wouldn't necessarily recommend it but I think it has its use. I think the only part I liked about what I wrote was the opening line "curtained lanyards drift in a gentle breeze...". The rest got out of hand and had no direction. Still, I think it would be enough to start writing a song from if I needed to pull something for a collaboration situation or just getting a project started.
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